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Fundamentals of Speech, a Sullivan County Community College Course taught at:
Liberty High School
125 Buckley Street
Liberty NY 12754
845-292-5400
SCCC Academic Division: Language Arts/Communications
SCCC Course Number and Title: ENG 1301
SCCC Credits: 3
Prerequisites: Successful completion of English 8-11
Instructor: William J. Fleck
Course Outline Author: Mr. William J. "Bill" Fleck (with significant input from SCCC
Outlines created by SCCC Professors Lisa Lindquist and Paul
Reifenheiser)
Contact: fleckwil@libertyk12.org
Date of Outline Creation: June 13, 2007
Semester session: Fall 2007
Class Location and Hours: Main campus, placePlaceNameLiberty PlaceTypeHigh School, at times to be determined by the Guidance department (meetings will take place no less than five days per week at 42 minutes per meeting)
Catalogue Course Description
This course provides public speaking training and practice.
General Education
This course satisfies one portion of the SUNY General Education Basic Communication (Category 10) requirement.
Course Objectives
Students who successfully complete this course will develop proficiency in oral discourse and evaluate oral presentation according to established criteria. Students will all learn to find and use a variety of sources of information for speeches.
The course will develop the following skills:
 overcoming fears of speaking
 overcoming fears of allowing appropriate silence
 delivering speeches with poise, comfort, and confidence
 orating speeches written by others
 the use of visual aids during a speech
 the ability to perform well in a question and answer format
Required Texts
A Pocket Guide to Public Speaking, O'Hair
Work Required Outside of Class
Expect the equivalent of one period of work--to read and to write, research, and practice speeches--for every period in class.
Evaluation Method
Students can expect to complete 10 to 15 assignments during the course; these will count as 70% of the course grade. These assignments will include (but may not be limited to):
--Famous Speech (each student will read a famous speech in front of the class)
--Story Speech (each student will tell a story using only notes)
--Reading a Children's Story
--Informative Speech (each student will write and deliver an informational speech using
visual aids)
--The Persuasive Speech (students will write and deliver a speech convincing the class
of the validity of his or her viewpoint)
--The Impromptu Speech (each student will have to answer questions from the class
and the instructor)
--New Broadcasts (students will write, rehearse, and read news)
--Cold Reads (students will be handed impromptu pieces to read "cold" in front of the
class)
--Discussion Panels (students will "group up" to lead the class in discussing a topic
they have researched)
--Performance of Literature (students will read a short creative piece to the class)
--Job Interviews (students will undergo a mock job interview in front of the class)
In addition, a final speech will be delivered as a final exam, worth 20% of the student's grade. Five sources are required for the speech.
The last 10% of the student's grade will be a consideration by the instructor of the student's in-class participation.
Late Work
Instructors will penalize students who deliver speeches late. Instructors will penalize 50% of the value of the assignment per class day that the speech is late.
Plagiarism
The LHS English Department/SCCC takes plagiarism seriously. Students who do speeches not their own (either in whole or in part, unless assigned), or who fail to cite properly their sources, will receive a failing grade for the assignment, and will be denied college credit for the course. The names of students guilty of plagiarism are reported to SCCC, and said report becomes a part of their college record.
Attendance Policy
Board of Education policy allows no more than 12 absences for semester courses.
You should know that many of the speeches assigned are paired or group speeches; leaving a speech partner (or group) in the lurch is a good way to make enemies and severely hurt your grade.
Absences on scheduled speech days are severely frowned upon, and repeated absences on days when you are scheduled to speak will likely result in your removal from the class by the instructor.
Information Literacy
To achieve academic success, students are required to become completely familiar with the library. An assignment will be given during the course of the semester to help students achieve this goal. Students will be expected to learn how to use periodical indexes and abstracts, print indexes, and references such as the dictionary, the encyclopedia, and statistical reference sources.
Outline of Topics
 Introducing the Techniques of Speaking
 Topic sentences, thesis
 Oral readings
 Aspects of listening
 Types of Speeches
 Transitions, attributing sources
 Descriptions, narration
 The use of Visual Aids
 Inductive and deductive reasoning
 Imagery, paraphrasing
 Group Dynamics
 Aspects of speaking
 Critiquing
Grading Scale
A = 93 - 100
A- = 90 - 92
B+ = 87 - 89
B = 83 - 86
B- = 80 - 82
C+ = 77 - 79
C = 73 - 76
C- = 70 - 72
D+ = 67 - 69
D = 63 - 66
D- = 60 - 62
F = below 60
Note: To receive transferable college credit, students must score a C or higher;
to receive high school credit, students must score 65 or higher.
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Speech - Mr. Fleck Name _____________________
Meet & Greet Speech
Your Job: To introduce a member of the class to everyone else.
Minimum Length: 3 minutes
Maximum: 5 minutes
Your speech must contain and/or demonstrate:
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Introduction (12)
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Biographical Information (demonstrated on outline -15)
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Interesting Fact (10)
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Conclusion (12)
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Category (Presentation)
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Posture (12)
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Volume/Rate (15)
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Tone (12)
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Timing (12)
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Total Points/Grade: _____
Categories Defined:
 Introduction: build anticipation for the speech (anecdote, rhetorical question, etc.)
 Biographical Info: Well, duh!
 Interesting Fact: What's something we may not know about this person?
 Conclusion: the summary; the wrap-up
 Posture: how comfortable/natural (yet professional) do you look up there?
 Volume/Rate: Can we understand you?
 Tone: the `mood' you communicate when you speak (should match subject)
 Timing: Do you fall within the parameters given (3-5 minutes)?
Start Time: ________
Finish: ________
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FUNDAMENTALS OF SPEECH
Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
FAMOUS SPEECH Assignment
Your Job: To paraphrase a famous speech (of your choice) live to the class within the assigned time (3-5 minutes).
Here's what you do:
Pick a famous speech (we're likely to go to the library to assist you in this), do a little background research on it, then rewrite it (or outline it) in your own words, and prepare to deliver it with an introduction and a conclusion (where appropriate).
Suggestions (you may choose from, but are not limited to):
 Martin Luther King's "I Have A Dream"
 Richard M. Nixon's "I Am Not A Crook"
 Elizabeth Cady Stanton's Seneca Falls Convention
 Abraham Lincoln's "Gettysburg Address"
 Clarence Darrow's Summary in the Leopold and Loeb Case
 Lou Gehrig's "Luckiest Man On the Face of the Earth"
Once you have chosen:
 Research the life of the person who gave it
 Research the circumstances in which it was given
 Research the impact the speech had
Prepare an introduction where you briefly re-cap these items.
DELIVERING THE PARAPHRASED SPEECH
Don't read word for word; practice so you can refer to your notes without being dependent upon them.
Try to deliver the speech in a normal speaking tone; don't speak in a monotonous or "readie" tone.
Make eye-contact with your audience.
You will be scored on the following:
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Choice of Speech (10)
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Intro to Speech (10)
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Info on original speaker (10)
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Quality of Paraphrase (determined by outline) (10)
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Summary (10)
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Category (Performance)
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Posture (10)
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Volume/Rate (10)
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Tone (10)
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Eye Contact (10)
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Timing (10)
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Total points: _______
Start time: _________
End time: _________
COMMENTS:
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SPEECH - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
Demonstration Speech
Your Job: To demonstrate how to do something useful in 3-5 minutes.
We shall free ourselves from the manuscript for this one, and speak from a prepared outline. The time has come to share your knowledge! You'll demonstrate/teach us how to do something.
THINGS I'VE SEEN BEFORE
How to do CPR
How to bake cookies (always a hit, especially if you bring the cookies IN)
How to hit a baseball
How to defend yourself from attack
How to tie a fly (fishermen)
How to win at paintball
How to maintain a car in good condition
How to use a skateboard
How to collect action figures for fun and profit
How to use e-Bay
Basics of guitar
Okay, you get the idea.
Ways to demonstrate:
Bring in props
Use charts/graphs
Have some video/audio
Use a prepared volunteer (you use unprepared volunteers at your own risk. Okay, I've warned you!)
What you'll need:
An OUTLINE for the speech (should not be word for word)
An introduction (address the "So what?" factor)
The body of the speech, delivered in an interesting/entertaining way
A conclusion/summary/wrap-up (something better than, "Okay, I'm done.")
What I'll be looking for (in addition to the above):
Volume, tone, pace, and pitch
Good posture
Good eye-contact
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How to Write an Outline for Speech Class
Dr. Paul Reifenheiser
Please type an outline. Include the following information.
 A sentence-length explanation of your topic
 How you plan to introduce your topic
 The main points of your argument in order of importance
 Examples of your main points.
 How you plan to conclude
Please use the following format:
Thesis:
This speech will inform about the benefits of owning a beagle
I Introduction
The opening will use humor to entice my audience. I will joke about how often my beagle, named Bernie, urinates on furniture, dominates the bed when my wife and I sleep at night, and wakes the dead with his loud howls. I'll note that, despite these drawbacks, we love the dog, and that proves the outstanding level of his good qualities.
II Main Body Points
Beagles are ranked among most friendly dogs in the country by the American Kennel Association.
Bernie often places his snout between stranger's legs as a show of affection.
Beagles are always adopted quickly from animal shelters.
The beagle is a smart animal, according to the nationally respected group called T.R.E.A.T. (The Republic of Enlightened Animal Trainers).
We trained Bernie how to sit, lay down, give high five, play dead, give paw, roll over, catch treats off of his snout, chase squirrels, bite the cat on command, and drive an 18-wheeler across country in search of she-beagles.
Bernie wrote the declaration of independence in a former life. Thomas Jefferson stole it from him after sending the dog on a fox-hunt.
Beagles were responsible for inventing the stapler, the wing-nut, and the pancreas.
The beagle is a wise investment, according to The Wall Street Journal.
Bernie does all of our finances, and he earned us a 35% return on our investment in pooper scoopers, and dog frisbees.
Bernie helps our toilets last longer by going to the bathroom outside.
President Bush's first choice for the Secretary of the Treasury was a beagle. However, the beagle declined to join the administration.
III Conclusion
I will close with a song medley that includes the following original compositions by P. Diddy and Barry Manilow: “Fly Like a Beagle,” “Ooops I Wet It Again,” “Smells Like Teen Beagle,” and “Shake Ya BeagleTailfeather.”
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SPEECH - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
Speech to Inform
Your Job: To inform us about something useful in 3-5 minutes.
Again, we shall free ourselves from the manuscript for this one, and speak from a prepared outline. The time has come to share your passion! You'll inform us about something you believe to be important in the course of living life.
THINGS I'VE SEEN BEFORE
 Why abortion is wrong (or right)
 Why a certain sports figure is the greatest ever (or overrated)
 Where rap/rock/country (etc.) music came from
 The life and career of certain entertainers, and why they're important
 Why gun control is wrong (or right)
 What is cancer, and how is it treated?
 What do Republicans/Democrats/Libertarians (etc.) believe
 What various religions teach about self defense (compare/contrast)
 The origin of the U.S. Marines
 Proper diet and exercise (or weight training)
 A history of hypnotism
Okay, you get the idea.
Ways to inform:
 Bring in props
 Use charts/graphs
 Have some video/audio
What you'll need:
 An OUTLINE for the speech (should not be word for word)
 An introduction (address the "So what?" factor)
 The body of the speech, delivered in an interesting/entertaining way
 A conclusion/summary/wrap-up (something better than, "Okay, I'm done.")
What I'll be looking for (in addition to the above):
 Volume, tone, pace, and pitch
 Good posture
 Good eye-contact
 Good diction (choice of words); avoid "um"
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SPEECH - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
Speech to Entertain
Your Job: To entertain us for 3-5 minutes.
Again, we shall free ourselves from the manuscript for this one, and speak from a prepared outline. The time has come to entertain us!
WAYS I'VE SEEN THIS DONE BEFORE
 Telling funny stories (something that happened to you or to others)
 Telling interesting stories
 Reading an original poem or story
 Rapping
 Singing
 Playing an instrument (with a bit of an explanation)
 Doing out-and-out Stand Up
 Performing a scene from a movie/TV show
Okay, you get the idea.
Ways to entertain:
 Bring in props
 Have some video/audio
What you'll need:
 An OUTLINE for the speech (should not be word for word)
 An introduction (address the "So what?" factor)
 The body of the speech, delivered in an interesting/entertaining way
 A conclusion/summary/wrap-up (something better than, "Okay, I'm done.")
What I'll be looking for (in addition to the above):
 Volume, tone, pace, and pitch
 Good posture
 Good eye-contact
 Good diction (choice of words); avoid "um"
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Speech - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
Group Presentation I: Panel Discussion
Your Job: As part of a group, you and your team will provide a 30-minute presentation, united by a common theme.
Models: Want to know what this might look like? Check out The View on ABC, Fox's The Best Damn Sports Show Ever, or Real Time with Bill Mahr on HBO.
What you'll do:
 Select a group leader
 Select a topic (“The Puzzle”)
 Research various aspects of that topic (“Pieces of the Puzzle”)
 Have each group member prepare a 5 - 7 minute part (“A Piece of the Puzzle”)
 Set up the order of the presentation (including the Leader's introduction and Conclusion)
 Prepare for “viewer” questions (which doesn't count toward your 30-minute requirement)
 Practice, practice, practice
The Presentation (Suggestion)
 Have the Leader open with a general summary which addresses the “So What?” factor
 Have each of the other presentations focus on an aspect of the overall topic in a way
 Have the leader summarize
 Question/Answer: have “expert” team members field appropriate questions
Good luck!
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Fundamentals of Speech - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
The Interview
Your Job: Team up with a partner, and do a 5-7 minute interview wherein one of you is the interviewer, and the other is the interviewee (and vice versa).
Models
 Entertainment talk shows ( Late Night With David Letterman; The Tonight Show)
 News talk shows ( Hardball, The O'Reilly Factor, Charlie Rose)
 Daytime talk shows ( Ellen, Oprah)
 Mock news shows ( The Daily Show, The Colbert Report)
 Sports talk ( CenterStage with Michael Kay)
 Job interviews
Grading
You'll receive two grades for this project. One will be based upon how well you interview; the other will be based upon how well you respond to interview questions.
Things To Work On
 As always, volume, tone, articulation, and rate of speech are important.
 Eye contact--especially with interviewer--is important.
 Follow-up questions (often made up on the spot) are good to use.
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Fundamentals of Speech - Mr. Fleck/Dr. Reifenheiser
The Tribute Speech
Your Job: There are two unequal pieces to this task. The first is the Tribute: You are to provide a 5-7 minute speech that celebrates the individual you have randomly selected. The second is the Thank You: the individual you pay tribute to will then follow up with a 30-60 second "thank you" speech.
Process
Tribute:
You'll draw the name of one of your classmates randomly.
You'll spend some time with that individual, talking to them and gathering information.
You will shape the information to emphasize the positive aspects of the individual you have selected.
You'll turn that info into a speech, wherein you'll celebrate (praise) the individual you've selected.
Thank You:
After you hear the speech in tribute to you, you will say a few words about the speaker, about the speech, and offer appropriate thank you's.
Expectations
Tribute:
Praise the subject of your speech (attempt to seem sincere).
Speak with dignity.
Offer brief stories that provide examples of praiseworthy deeds.
Describe your subject's achievements and accomplishments, and demonstrate why we should care (the "So What?" factor).
Thank You:
Convey to the audience the value you place on your tribute.
Express gratitude, and acknowledge anyone who has helped you along the way.
Attempt to express your thoughts genuinely and with humility.
As always, attend to volume, tone, rate, pace, eye contact, etc.
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The "Roast" Speech
Your Job: There are two unequal pieces to this task. The first is the Roast: You are to provide a 5-7 minute speech that roasts the individual you have randomly selected. The second is the Pay Back: the individual you pay tribute to will then follow up with a 30-60 second "thank you" speech.
Note (and this is important): A roast is not a rank session or, in any sense, a game of "the dozens." Rather, a roast is defined as "a humorous tribute to a person, one in which the speaker jokingly pokes fun…the goal is still to celebrate (or pay tribute to) an individual and his or her achievements" (A Pocket Guide to Public Speaking, p. 172).
Process
Roast:
 You'll draw the name of one of your classmates randomly.
 You'll spend some time with that individual, talking to them and gathering information.
 You will shape the information to roast the aspects of the individual you have selected.
 You'll turn that info into a speech, wherein you'll roast the individual you've selected. You'll then deliver that speech to the individual before you deliver it to the class, so truly hurtful material will be eliminated. The decisions of the person being roasted shall be final in this regard.
Pay Back:
After you hear the speech roasting you, you will say a few words about the speaker, about the speech, and offer appropriate thank you's. You must clear this beforehand with the person whom you are paying back. They may exercise the same veto power over your material.
Expectations
Roast:
 Pay tribute to the individual you've selected through humor.
 Jokes may be funny, but anything vicious or hateful won't be left unpunished. Don't cross the line.
 The underlying purpose is to pay tribute; humor should be shaped in that way.
 Demonstrate why we should care (the "So What?" factor).
Pay Back:
 Convey to the audience (in a humorous way) the value you place on your tribute.
 Express gratitude, and acknowledge anyone who has helped you along the way.
As always, attend to volume, tone, rate, pace, eye contact, etc.
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Final Speech
YOUR JOB: To deliver a speech (selected from the options below) to the best of your ability for a minimum of 10--and a maximum of 12--minutes.
Speeches You May Use to Fulfill This Assignment:
 Speech to Demonstrate
 Speech to Inform
 Speech to Persuade
 Speech to Entertain (within reason)
Process
We'll draw the speech order at random. The day/slot you get is the day/slot you go. The Final Speech counts as 20% of your overall grade for the course, so please don't miss it.
Expectations
The speech should demonstrate how far you've come as a speaker since the beginning of the course. I'll be looking for:
 Good posture
 Good eye contact
 Good volume, pace, pitch, expression, and power
 Proper timing
 A good outline (index card are acceptable)
Suggestions
Use visual aids
Make arrangements for any necessary equipment well ahead of time
Make sure any volunteers you use are in your control (they should not be giving the speech)
Good luck!!
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